Hello,this year we did poem I did it on Kauai bowling alley I think you will really like it because one of the effects was a wanted sign which was going to be there butt didn't loud right and I think that would have a big difference because a cool effect its called Ken Burns effect.
I liked your music
ReplyDeleteIt got cut off at the end and we sar your adiuo
I liked your topic
It was short and sweet
ReplyDeleteDat ending...
The music fits the topic?
I like the jazz, Gives almost a 90's or something feel.
ReplyDeleteThe room is visible at the end
Nice voice over and great writing on the poem
I liked the shots of people bowling
ReplyDeleteThe music is too loud
I like how you rhymed the words
cool Music in the background
ReplyDeletesome b-roll are blury
Creative b-roll
1. Like your shots, the turkey is cool
ReplyDelete2. Cover up your a-roll with b-roll
3. Like the background music
I liked the music you used because it matches with the topic
ReplyDeleteAt the end we see the tech room
I liked the tone of voice you sounded excited to bowl
Nice rhymes
ReplyDeleteIt ends weird
Nice music
I like your turkey B-roll
ReplyDeleteyou could have done better on the end B-roll it showed where you recorded the B-roll
I like your bowling shots
I like the music
ReplyDeleteSome shots were blurry
I like how you name, "You get a three hundred to claim the game" and "Three strikes is a turkey".
I really like the background music that you chose
ReplyDeleteMaybe fix the last part of your video
I really like the different rhymes that you came up with
Good shot of entering the bowling alley.
ReplyDeleteYou could see at the ending with the room were you practiced saying the poem.
Good job on music.
I liked your topic its something I also enjoy to do
ReplyDeleteYou need to add more interesting b-roll the shots you took weren't that interesting and creative
I liked the background music you added
I like how you rhymed.
ReplyDeleteAt the last part you get cut off.
I liked your music.
I like the background music. Really good Jazz!
ReplyDeleteIt was a little bit short, and the Jazz was too loud.
I like how you showed a Turkey when you said it. How did you get that?!?!?
I like the music.
ReplyDeleteYou need pad in your audio.
I like your video clips of people bowling.
I like the music
ReplyDeleteat the end there was a clip that wasn't part of you poem
your poem was well written
I like how you showed what you were talking about
ReplyDeleteYour poem just ended without warning
I also liked how you made it rhyme
It was really well written
ReplyDeleteThere could have been more quality like for example the camera like you getting ready to bowl
And the back round music was good
I love your topic choice
ReplyDeleteI couldn't hear you over the music and you have some uncommon B-roll
I love the shot of the turkey up on the board
I like the jazz music in the background.
ReplyDeleteYou can see the voice over room in the background.
I like your topic, you are the only one that chose bowling.
I liked that you had the different bowlers
ReplyDeleteOne thing that could be improved is that there were some random shots that didnt make sense like there was one shot of the ground and at the end a shot of an empty studio room.
I liked the pan at the beginning
Nice b-roll, not only one thing
ReplyDeleteThe a-roll was shown
I like the music
your music is really catchy
ReplyDeletethe music distracted from your voice overs
I could tell that you practiced your poem
I like the background music
ReplyDeleteAt the end you could only see the a-roll
You read the poem pretty well
Love the shot of the bowling alley sign
ReplyDeleteI could see the ground and room
Loved many shots of bowling alley
I liked the shot of the bowling ball going down the lane!
ReplyDeleteSome shots didn't make sense.
Nice rhyme scheme!
Some shots matched well with your b-roll
ReplyDeleteYour music was really loud and overwhelmed your audio
Your topic was really creative and cool
The plot was very cool, I personally love to go bowling so I connected to it.
ReplyDeleteThe music was quite loud and also some of the voice overs had improper grammar.
Great B-Roll, it constantly was relative to the voice overs!